Monday, January 18, 2010

Chapter 3

"Whitefrost!" Owltail whimpered.
He looked at Fawnpelt," Why are you standing there? Help her!"
Fawnpelt looked upset.
Whitefrost sat up.
"Owltail, let me see my kits"
Fawnpelt nuged them forward.
"They're so wonderful! I'd like Snowfoot to take care of them."
"W-What do you mean?" Owltail asked
"goodbye Owltail... We will meet again someday, I promise you that..."
"Whitefrost! Whitefrost! She can't be dead!" Owltail screeched.
"It's too late... Whitefrost is gone....."
Swiftpaw padded away sadly to tell Moonstar, when he had a vision.
Whitefrost was in front of him and she said," Nothing will ever be the same. Two have become one and the clawmarks are not yours."
Then it was all over.
Swiftpaw suddenly heard her urgent voice in his ear, " Go NOW something terrible is coming, GO!"
Suddenly a terrible snarling rang out from the bramble tunnel.
Swiftpaw turned in time to see a fox burst through the entrance!
It tore into the camp and reached its head inside the warriors den!
Swiftpaw should have heard the warriors screeching trying to get away from the foxes face.
But the only thing going through his head was Whitefrosts warning....... :O

Sunday, January 17, 2010

Chapter 2

The mewing from the kit abruptly stopped.
"No!!!!" Owltail screeched.
Together Fawnpelt and Owltail rolled Whitefrost over.
But they were too late. The kit lay crushed where Whitefrost had been.
"Noooooo" cried Owltail again.
Then Whitefrost stopped moving.
Fawnpelt said," I think that's all."
"So now I have no kits after all this?" Owltail yowled
"YOOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWO" Whitefrost screeched.
"I can't believe it! There are more kits!" Fawnpelt gasped.
A ripple passed through the she-cat's flank.
She was finding it hard to breathe.
Another kit fell onto the nursery floor.
By now the other 3 queens in the nursery were awake.
"Here." Fawnpelt nuged the kit to Crowfur.
Swiftpaw looked at his mentor with huge eyes.
"There is one more kit!" Fawnpelt said
The last kit landed on the nursery floor.
Swiftpaw began to lick the kit, when he was through Fawnpelt set it next to Snowfur.
"Congratulations! You are now the father of 2 she-cats!" Fawnpelt said to Owltail.
Whitefrost suddenly stopped breathing.
She lay still.

Saturday, January 16, 2010

Chapter 1

" Fawnpelt, come quick!" Swiftpaw woke to hear Owltail's voice echoing through the medicine cats den.
"Whitefrost's kits are coming!" he heard Owltail cry.
"They're very early." was Fawnpelt's grim reply.
Swiftpaw felt her paw prod him in the side. "Swiftpaw, Whitefrost's kits are-" she broke off at a wail from inside the nursery. "Hurry!" Owltail cried.
Swiftpaw akwardly scrambled to his feet, and pelted after Fawnpelt and Owltail.
When he arrived he could hear Fawnpelt, " That's it, nice and easy."
He sat down beside Whitefrost to watch how Fawnpelt delivered her kits.
Whitefrost let out an agonizing cry and a damp kit fell onto the nursery floor.
Swiftpaw crouched down to inspect it.
Fawnpelt's voice was gentle, "It's no use Swiftpaw, the kit is dead."
"Nooooooo!" cried Owltail. He started frantically licking the kit
" Stop!" Fawnpelt was not in the mood for this.
She turned back to Whitefrost in time to see another kit on the ground.
"Lick it gently," Fawnpelt said, placing the kit in front of Swiftpaw.
Swiftpaw immdeatly started licking the tiny bundle.
It started to mew and looked up at Swiftpaw.
He nuged the kit to Whitefrost to feed.
Suddenly Whitefrost rolled over, right on top of the kit!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :O



The First Chapter is in the next post

This is my story....... HOpe you all like it!

Tuesday, January 12, 2010

My Story!

I made a story blog!! Here it is!

The story will start very soon


OH and when I talk on a cbox i am Skypelt and I am the creator of Featherclans blog and Doveclan's blog, just I am on a different account........ K!!!